Hi Kataraina, I really like the sentence that says he ate Ahi like a kid eats spaghetti. It helps me see the scene in my mind. Yuck! Now, when I read this I am confused. The narrative does not make sense. Did you leave parts out when you copied your writing into the slides??? Can you fix it, and make the embedded slides larger too.
Hi Kataraina, I really like the sentence that says he ate Ahi like a kid eats spaghetti. It helps me see the scene in my mind. Yuck! Now, when I read this I am confused. The narrative does not make sense. Did you leave parts out when you copied your writing into the slides??? Can you fix it, and make the embedded slides larger too.
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